Monday, February 14, 2011

Classmate Response

"Would you still enjoy my voice as much if behind the drawls, pauses, and pitch-changes lay a silver-tongued-snake named Lucifer? Capable of twisting, manipulating, and conjuring elaborate hoaxes and hexes just to hatch at inconvenient times that I establish? Your miserable love and crush fail to my techniques proven over eons. All your spells work well on most, but what do you do when they don't?"- Joshua West

I really enjoy the idea of a silver-tongued-snake twisting and manipulating behind the scenes.  The only area I would like to see improve is the transition from (what I believe to be) profound description and emotion to an almost complacent question.

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